Expansion of the Japanese military
I don't agree with the expansion of the Japanese military.
Japan always tries to take Korea, because the location of Korea is very important and very good.
Japan did a lot of acts of aggresion already. If the USA didn't attack HIROSIMA, Japan afflicts the other counturies including Korea all the while. they even take up the position that DOCK-DO island is theirs.
If Japan get strong military, they will try to make war.
They want wide land to live, because Japan is sinking. The Japanese government is buying land in Africa. But If their power is strong, they don't have to buy. They will just take land from another counturies.
For these reasons, Japan should not expand their military.
posted by Ju-Won Son @ 3:15 AM
1 Comments:
Hello,
You make very strong statements here based on past events; you should give recent evidence that supports your arguments.
Your writing was easy to read, but there were a few awkward phrases. "Bother," for example, is a little soft; we use it normally when we talk about people bother other people. Also check your use of "until now" and how you start your sentence with "even."
Also check subject-verb agreement.
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